You did a fantastic job describing what it would feel like if you were on the moon. I love how you incorporated rhyme. Looks like you're an up-and-coming writer in the making!
I have often thought about what it would be like to travel into space. I think if I had the opportunity to go there, I would probably stay because I'd miss my friends and family so much! Neil Armstrong was so brave going to the moon.
If you had the opportunity, would you go to the moon? I think the view would be phenomenal!
PS - I love the image you chose in the background!
Hi Temu this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
I hope that you're enjoying your summer holidays? I'm just checking in to remind you that the Summer Learning Journey is still underway and that you're still able to participate - we miss hearing from you!
Here's the link to get you started: https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities/y6-8-weekly-activities-2019?authuser=0
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Kia ora Temu,
You did a fantastic job describing what it would feel like if you were on the moon. I love how you incorporated rhyme. Looks like you're an up-and-coming writer in the making!
I have often thought about what it would be like to travel into space. I think if I had the opportunity to go there, I would probably stay because I'd miss my friends and family so much! Neil Armstrong was so brave going to the moon.
If you had the opportunity, would you go to the moon? I think the view would be phenomenal!
PS - I love the image you chose in the background!
Nga mihi
Erica
Hi Temu this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
Hi Temu,
Good work on Activity 2, you sort of have a thing for space. I enjoy reading your poem, It gave me the inspiration to make mine better.
Kia ora Temu
I hope that you're enjoying your summer holidays? I'm just checking in to remind you that the Summer Learning Journey is still underway and that you're still able to participate - we miss hearing from you!
Here's the link to get you started: https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities/y6-8-weekly-activities-2019?authuser=0
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Ngā mihi
Jordan
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